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June 28th, 2014, 5:33 pm

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pandiii,

June 28th, 2014, 5:33 pm

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LE KISS!
Next page will be out tomorrow :3
and DAT SEME STARE!

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inktola,

June 28th, 2014, 6:24 pm

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this page is so cute :3

Eveiss,

June 29th, 2014, 6:30 pm

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AW YEAH! That's what I was waiting for. <333 You go Taka!
Avalon looks so cute in 3rd panel~! ;u; Fourth panel makes me soooo happy. ^w^
BUT SIXTH PANEL. HOT DAMN. DAT BEDROOM EYES. I'M SCREAMING. TOO GOOD. ABORT MISSION. ABORT.

pandiii,

June 30th, 2014, 4:39 pm

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@inktola: thanks ; w ;

pandiii,

June 30th, 2014, 4:40 pm

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@Eveiss: MISSION ABORTED! Joking, I'm glad you like it, indeed HOT DAMN about Taka's bedroom eyes, could make even the most stubborn person weak in the knees :3

kitkat12,

July 6th, 2014, 11:56 pm

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You two are amazing! Well done with both the writing for the comic strip and the art. Both are done very well. Each of the characters have their cute charms come out quite easily and their reactions and expressions to different things are quite wonderful. Every page you slowly see the progress that was made since the first page of the comic in the art work and story telling. The pacing is done very well and kind of at a pace that matches well with teenage confusion with all of the emotional baggage that accompanies trying to find out who you are and what you want.

This page I like a lot of things in particular with it. Taka's reaction to saying to Avalon on the previous page that he doesn't want to talk about their other friend's problem and wants to focus on what going on between them is very well done in the fact that over the past few days Taka has probably been thinking of what he can do to express his feelings to Avalon and not have to hold back anymore especially after they had a makeout session in the classroom the day before.

The next panel I like is the second panel where Avalon is completely confused on the direction of where their conversation was going and moving into the third panel where his mouth in agape and Taka taking his chance to steal a kiss.

Moving on to the last two things I like about this page, I'd like to mention the smaller panel I believe the 5th panel where it's a momentary t after Taka took a moment to steal a kiss from Avalon where it looks like a reflective type of panel that draws you in for a moment. It keeps the pacing nice and not moving too fast.

Lastly 6th panel which is now just me fangirling over Taka's smug look and bedroom eyes. He's just completely gorgeous here! Basically saying "I have you hooked"

Alright sorry for the long paragraph of lame analysis I really don't do this too often. Hope you enjoyed reading the comments everyone leaves for you two! Keep up the good work! You two make a great team!

Amapora,

July 7th, 2014, 12:12 am

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@kitkat12: thank you so much! You have no idea how happy it makes me that someone notices how I have constructed this characters and that you are able to understand what they might be actually thinking. Often with BL comics readers don't really care about character development and they focus more on the hot stuff xD and the main focus of this comic is teenagers dealing with their own issues on their own way until they reach adulthood... that you were able to read their struggles really thrills me, your comment really made my day! Thank you!

pandiii,

July 7th, 2014, 12:45 am

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@kitkat12: The comment really made my day as well :3 Thank you so much Kit! FS is indeed about teenage struggles and much deeper than it seems I appreciate you read between the lines and the drawings... the analysis is not lame at all :D

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