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July 6th, 2014, 1:00 pm

Average Rating: 5.00

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pandiii,

July 6th, 2014, 11:00 am

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Things are getting steamy there!!! OwO Please comment :3 ┬┤til next week!

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Grapefruit,

July 6th, 2014, 2:32 pm

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This is really sweet. ;w; Loving it!

Eveiss,

July 6th, 2014, 5:35 pm

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Huhuhuhuh. <3
I can't express how much I love it. Seriously, I can't.
Ffff, I'm only a squealing mess, don't expect too much.
I'm wondering if anyone is going to walk in or they will have fun without interruptions. xD
Idk, what else should I write so... I'll just end here and get back to looking at the new pages. *__*

pandiii,

July 7th, 2014, 12:48 am

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@Eveiss: Eveiss! I'm glad you're liking it so far and let us know about your squealing mess state xD jk, glad you liked today's page.

@Grapefruit: Thank you! :D

kitkat12,

July 9th, 2014, 9:30 pm

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Heat of the moment Well I can't blame both of them for getting swept away in the heat of the moment usually things like this end up in a couple of different way. Most being : 1) They get interrupted, 2) They get caught by someone they know, 3)Well they go really far. I just hope they stop somewhere without regretting git later on.

Again I really like how all of the frames are quite fluid and the emotions seem to reach the reader very well. We know the conflicting emotions of Avalon but we also start to see how he for once is actually craving something from someone and being emotionally and physically attracted to someone for probably the very first time and wanting more. Again love the art work and story telling.

Neone (Guest),

July 21st, 2014, 8:26 pm

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:) Very nice. But there's one thing...
You broke the 180-degree rule.
Between panels 4 and 5, you jumped the camera to their other side, which isn't something you should do. It disorients the reader. (Unless you wanted that effect to mimic how dizzy their minds are feeling.)
*shrugs* The comic is still very enjoyable, though. ^.^

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