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July 12th, 2014, 4:23 pm

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pandiii,

July 12th, 2014, 4:23 pm

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The heat of the moment continues! :3

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kitkat12,

July 21st, 2014, 12:50 am

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Taka looks surprised So not only is Taka basically leaving evidence in a pretty noticeable spot that he and Avalon were basically having an intense make out session. He actually seems genuinely surprised that Avalon is enjoying it so much and even reciprocating with what I assume if kiss him intensely back on his own. (or so it seems to me for the last panel)

What really draws me in is that Taka seems to have that dreamy type of stare that says."I hope this isn't a dream" And seeming to enjoy every bit of Avalon's reactions and seemingly need to be more intimate with Taka.

As to note on Avalon, his inner thoughts on the whole situation are rather interesting since he stated before that he never really experienced these types of feelings and he really wants to indulge himself more in them. Even though he says he "needs more" it's more so stating that he's wanting more if anything. Which is somewhat conflicting but still very well done. Expressions and dialogue are superb.

Also these are just my random rambling thoughts in case anybody else sees this post.....

Amapora,

July 21st, 2014, 1:37 am

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@kitkat12: Thank you for noticing Taka's expression! We actually struggled to make it so that the message was clear. All of the thoughts you mentioned were going trough his mind and I didn't want him to have that cliché I'M-SUCH-A-SEME-LOOK-AT-MY-UNAFFECTED-EXPRESSION face that most yaois have their semes make, it's frustrating! It's almost as if the only human being in the couple is the uke!

zinnzinnluv,

October 30th, 2014, 11:31 am

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oh mai. >v< das vury saxy

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